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[Communist]

After several days and nights of constant typing, I am proud to present the 10,000+ word BoSS story, The Man in the Shadows. You will go to read it here:

http://thekgbfiles.blogspot.com/

If you don't bother to read it, Baby Jesus will cry and you will never enjoy a beer again.

Seriously, please read this thing. It's not easy to write this much and I'd hate it if no one bothered.

[ShLoNkY]

This is random but you are a very good writer. For all you other f*ckers READ IT. Commy took a lot of time writing this and is pretty damn good.

Plan on spending 10 minutes or so to read this b*tch. Those of you with a short attention span, smoke a joint or something beforehand. . It gets interesting so do it.

[Mandraque]

i began reading it and found myself in 2 parts of it woot!!! nice writing btw shlonk wasnt kidding....

[DarkShadow]

Its... a bit much, and I'm not one for reading, I did read it though, But I dunno why you would write something like that unless your the type who is locked in your room with nothing better to do? meh, Go play CS!

[Sniprwulf]

I'm impressed.

I read part of it and damn, thats crazy man. GJ

I'll finish reading it later

[Mr. Sticks]

Very impressive, I read almost half of it, but it's all ready a late night and I've got school tomorrow, so I will have to finish reading it tomorrow. I noticed I am in the story, too. Huzzah! Nice work Commie.

[*CHILIDOG*]

I can appreciate the ammount of work you put into that. Very well written. Only one problem: you totally left me out of the story after the train wreck... I mean wtf... I'm not even at the island for the grand finally (sp?), nor did i kick any ass before it. Anyway, I appreciate being included at all, though, so whatever. Spot in the sequel?

[G-Hood]

I dieded? :(

[Xiertic]

Dude, that was absolute ownsauce. Mad kudos to you for that one.


Chapter WTF: XIERTIC DIEZ!!!!!!

Just kidding.

roflmao, I see you remembered my warning. Smart of you.

Edit: "Nekulturny"??? WTF did you just call me there? lol

Edited by Xiertic, 05 September 2006 - 08:47 AM.

[pusadolfo]

That was great man, great writin and i appreciate "The interrogator extraordinaire" jeje nice!!

but i must agree with chili in something, some of us disappeared in the middle of the story, did we die or something? what happened to us!!!

jk amazin story, i can see a movie.

and

Chapter WTF: XIERTIC DIEZ!!!!!!

Just kidding. lmfao.

[Xiertic]

but i must agree with chili in something, some of us disappeared in the middle of the story, did we die or something? what happened to us!!!

You were there! If the poor guy tried to give every person a part in every part of the story it'd end up being as long as a novel and probably never get finished in any sort of reasonable time. I disappeared after the very start (save one brief mention at the end), but I still know that somewhere in all the comotion at the end I was in there kickin' ass with my bullpup.

Chapter WTF: XIERTIC DIEZ!!!!!!

Just kidding. lmfao.

Not funny damn you. >.<

Edited by Xiertic, 05 September 2006 - 09:33 AM.

[ghozy]

I will definitely read it.

[SpeakerSilenced]

I got banned why? haha. Cheers.

[XxInColdBloodxX]

Its very nice, but long. I bookmarked it for future refrence.
Very good

[Chris82]

Very, very nice.

You made my f*cking day.

And you gave me some ideas for my map!

GG, I'm saving this.

[Novahawk]

Not bad... i like it.. good job

[At The Gates]

�Guilty as charged,� came a strangely accented voice from his right. It sounded like a cross between a Boston resident and a cowboy. �Mr. Sticks and I watched you waste Kru and the Mexican, so we decided to use tactics rather than force.� �Well, well, I didn�t think that you had the stones or the brains to pull that type of thing off, Gates,�

woot, im famous.im still reading, so I want to see how much of a part I actually have..hehe.

nice work so far commie.

ok I just finished reading, and that was pretty damn good...only thing though..im suprised I didnt get killed..hehe, even though it was two small parts man, i appreciate being chosen to have a few lines. good work, and Id like to see some future work if your ever up for it man.

Edited by At The Gates, 05 September 2006 - 05:08 PM.

[Mr. Sticks]

You were there! If the poor guy tried to give every person a part in every part of the story it'd end up being as long as a novel and probably never get finished in any sort of reasonable time. I disappeared after the very start (save one brief mention at the end), but I still know that somewhere in all the comotion at the end I was in there kickin' ass with my bullpup.
Not funny damn you. >.<

Agreed. I am perfectly happy with the part I got, which was getting my brains blown out in a CS game, strategically, to allow Gates to come behind Commie and own him while I was distracting him.

Edited by Mr. Sticks, 05 September 2006 - 04:58 PM.

[*CHILIDOG*]

If the poor guy tried to give every person a part in every part of the story it'd end up being as long as a novel and probably never get finished in any sort of reasonable time.

I'm not looking at it from so much a narcicist point of view (as in "not enough Chili") so much as from a "lets make this thing cohesive" point of view. I was in 3/4 of the story and then when he goes through the list of peeps at the island, I'm not mentioned. Really I just want to have a super gruesome death after the train hits. So I'll just assume that's what happened.X(

[Ezekiel]

Not bad, but the whole "T-spawn weapon", "Noobs", etc kinda kicked me out of the story.